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Social Media Content for Richard Smyth's "Genetis: A Rhizography"
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Audience participation via Facebook, Twitter, and YouTube Chat
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The following are postings on Twitter that promoted the live Traversal of Richard Smyth's Genetis: A Rhizography prior to the event and thanked the participants after the event. Also included is a transcript of the YouTube Live chat from during the Traversal.
Twitter
The Electronic Literature Lab used their Twitter account to post promotional content regarding the Traversal of Genetis: A Rhizography.
YouTube Live Chat
Because Traversals are all streamed live via YouTube, the lab takes advantage of the chat feature offered by the network to provide a forum for the audience to make comments and ask questions. The chat is then saved and added to this book as part of the Traversal archive. The Traversal can be watched on YouTube here.
Holly June
Hello everyone!
Kathleen Zoller
Hello!
trupaokl
[happy face emoji]
Richard Snyder
Hi all!
Andrew Thompson
Good morning!
Joel Clapp
Hello!
Mariusz Pisarski
Hello everyone!
Viet Anh Nguyen
Hello y'all
Holly June
For this event, Sarah West did the art in my place. She did a wonderful job!
Dan Walker
Hi everyone!
Astrid Ensslin
Hi everyone! Welcome! Good to see you all.
Kathleen Zoller
I heard a bit!
Kathleen Zoller
Hello Astrid! [red heart emoji]
Mariusz Pisarski
Indeed, Holly. Very nice, futuristic, art from Sarah for the event. It reminds of Judgment Day film poster a bit
Electronic Literature Lab
hi, folks
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There is a bit of a lag due to YouTube. We will edit the lag out in final production
Kathleen Zoller
I notice lexia are referred to as "cells", was lexia an official term coined by Storyspace or was it one scholars formed?
Holly June
I love how the folios even give you instructions on inserting the disc into your computer.
Kathleen Zoller
Agreed Holly, I think they unknowingly helped preserve the context of the work
Astrid Ensslin
@Kathleen: George P. Landow uses it in his books, drawing on Barthes.
Mariusz Pisarski
Great question, Kathleen. Lexia was formed by scholars. Technically in hypertext we speak about nodes and links. But George Landow took a term lexia from Roland Barthes and lexias replaced nodes
Kathleen Zoller
Oh how interesting! Thank you for answering my question. George Landow is definitely a name I remember
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Many us differentiated nodes and lexias by thinking of node as the apparatus that made it possible to add words/content to produce a lexia
Mariusz Pisarski
Very interesting!
Mariusz Pisarski
Felman, Shoshana. WRITING AND MADNESS: (LITERATURE/PHILOSOPHY/ PSYCHOANALYSIS). Trans. Martha Noel Evans. Ithaca: Cornell UP, 1985.
Kathleen Zoller
@Electronic Literature Lab I love that!
Kathleen Zoller
Thank you, Mariusz!
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nodes are also referred to as spaces. See Bolter's Writing Space
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Plato took on the notion of madness and art in Ion.
Astrid Ensslin
my favorite part of the work
Richard Snyder
I appreciate the warning at the entry of the labyrinth. It seems very classical.
Astrid Ensslin
memography!
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The multiple paths available in hypertexts were seen / described often as "forking paths," a reference to Borges
Astrid Ensslin
we love surprises
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his lexis titles are important storytelling features
Kathleen Zoller
Hypertext has always felt like a sacred space to me, where my thoughts can move freely in abstraction. It is truly a unique and beautiful experience
Kathleen Zoller
There has to be a word for that
Richard Snyder
Well put, Kathleen. It seems to mirror the natural movements of the human mind. I believe that was Vannevar Bush's argument in the mid-20th century with the Memex.
Astrid Ensslin
a rhizography, Kathleen?
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Landow's book Hypertext was also influential during this period
Mariusz Pisarski
"logic of dreams, poetry, and invention"
Kathleen Zoller
@Richard Snyder @Astrid Ensslin those are both excellent thoughts! Agreed, it does seem to move in the same patterns as the mind
Electronic Literature Lab
I am loving the lore Richard is sharing with us
Kathleen Zoller
Agreed, having the author's commentary makes the work that much more rich
Richard Snyder
"I find comfort in this analogy."
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what is it when the father raised the child for himself?
Mariusz Pisarski
It's such a great, humorous take on the myth of creation: Ken and Barbie, junkyard.
Kathleen Zoller
Agreed, it's very unique!
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there is music here. Can you all hear it?
Kathleen Zoller
the music came back
Kathleen Zoller
yes!
Richard Snyder
I can!
Kathleen Zoller
It fades in and out
Electronic Literature Lab
Yes, that is the way it is presented
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we move to poetry in this next lexia
Richard Snyder
The idea of the boy being unable to generate his own life's blood is also fascinating--there is no independence without self-sustenance.
Kathleen Zoller
Very good point!
Mariusz Pisarski
Absolutely!
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hence the psychosis
Kathleen Zoller
The poetry feels very much like a creation story to me, especially with a woman being tied to nature
Richard Snyder
Interesting; so here the speaker captures self-sustenance but only through mimicking what the mother provides, not providing his own blood.
Richard Snyder
And the imagery is violent -- the sustenance can only be produced through the destruction of the self.
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We should be watching the titles of the lexias
Astrid Ensslin
@Kathleen: when you read "Myth" first, it is essentially like reading a feminist take on Genesis.
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if we had followed the r, we would notice the lexias spell out "parable"
Richard Snyder
Yes, it reminds me of poetry regarding the myth of generative creation that combined Christian and classical (e.g. the Bower of Bliss in Spenser's Faerie Queene)
Kathleen Zoller
@Richard Snyder that does seem to be one of the underlying themes of the hypertext
Kathleen Zoller
@Astrid Ensslin agreed!
Richard Snyder
Creation often seems to come from the excess of this sort of verdant overflow of life -- I'm seeing this here in the mother bursting with milk, but it is an imbalance instead of a balance.
Dan Walker
@Richard, it's interesting to think of how narrative-making and the therapeutic process ties into all of it -- stories as a way to do that self-sustenance
Richard Snyder
Oh, excellent point @Dan Walker
Astrid Ensslin
Agreed, Dan, and it's striking to see this trend happening in Twine now.
Mariusz Pisarski
And it is also a great news for hypertext scholars, after some years of neglect, the node-link structures found a very interesting narrative/therapeutic use
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It is such a horrific experience he recounts to us
Richard Snyder
I can't imagine going through this and then revisiting it. I appreciate the sharing.
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the sound again, "Bizarre."
Astrid Ensslin
I agree. It's shocking - Foucault through and through.
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Richard said it helps to talk about it with us
Astrid Ensslin
Apparently they gave him Haldol because they thought he was on drugs. He wasn't.
Mariusz Pisarski
Can you imagine being taken to a hospital under mental breakdown and see the name of the hospital bearing your won name.....
Mariusz Pisarski
Your own name
Astrid Ensslin
as if grad school was a symptom of mental health. Anyone who's been through grad school knows it's the exact opposite.
Richard Snyder
@Astrid Ensslin Yeah.
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It is a wonderful site in Mexico he is describing. I got to see it in the past
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You said it, Astrid
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Grad school was a trial of spirit
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we will begin the Q&A at 11:30
Dan Walker
I love the hypertext weaving back and forth between different kinds of writing -- theory, fable, memoir, all working together
Astrid Ensslin
The Plateaus
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blame school
Richard Snyder
@Dan Walker hypertext seems to encourage this mix of genres, don't you think? Perhaps the sort of compartmentalization effect of writing lexia leads to different modes of expressing the same things?
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mirror--Lacan?
Astrid Ensslin
Beautifully put, Richard
Katya Farinsky
Agreed Dan & Richard, the hypertext paired with personal stories is such a rich experience. [red heart emoji]
Richard Snyder
Reminds me of "They Flee from Me" by Wyatt..."all is turned thorough my gentlenessInto a strange fashion of forsaking."
Astrid Ensslin
It's from Haraway's Cyborg Manifesto Richard SnyderI think we can see, too, the mirror of the mind in its processing, input, and output -- no barrier between the primary and secondary
Mariusz Pisarski
@Dan @Richard Snyder Paths, such us "spiral link" and "memory paths of..." play an important part in organizing the whole. I think Richard uses Storyspace paths much more than most hypertext writers.
Richard Snyder
Did paths inspire the same mechanism in Scalar?
Dan Walker
yes @Richard Snyder! The tight little compartments arrange in so many ways. Reminds me of how on Instagram you can scroll from a beer ad to a political post to a friend's family photo all in one swipe
Astrid Ensslin
I doubt it, Richard.
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Ulmer was trying to get us to rethink hypertext theory, envisioning it as a rhizome
Astrid Ensslin
The paths are a lot more obvious and straightforward in Scalar
Dan Walker
let's drop everything and re-organize REL4 into a Deleuzian rhizome lol
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:)))))
Kathleen Zoller
Dan let's do iiiit!
Astrid Ensslin
So cool, does anyone know The Princess Murderer? It does the same thing but frames it in terms of a feminist critique of gamer culture.
Richard Snyder
Reminds me of the piece "Mobile Figures" by David Lloyd and Erik Loyer in Vectors. Rhizome as applied to historical scholarship, but here applied to personal history.
Richard Snyder
I love the idea of emphasizing the speed of composing in hypertext to map that.
Astrid Ensslin
I'd love to hear a bit more about Richard's work with Ulmer. Perhaps for the Q&A.
Electronic Literature Lab
Astrid, let's ask him to read this lexis and then move to the Q&A
Astrid Ensslin
If you ask me: writing is therapy - even if it's about (boring) narratology lol!
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if you have a question, please post it in this chat
Richard Snyder
Thank you so much, Richard. I'm wondering how the hypertextual nature of this work (vs. print) affected the process of revisiting it for you? I'm thinking of the fact that you "spoke" to yourself
Richard Snyder
audibly from the past, etc. Also the idea of being "lost" in your own previous thoughts, lexia, paths...
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Yes, we have the lexias to share in the book
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It was very personal
Richard Snyder
Thank you! It's very interesting to hear your process.
Richard Snyder
It's intriguing to consider these traversals as performances--works in themselves.
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the path to intellectualism involves the personal experience
Richard Snyder
Yeah, anysort of dualism that separates out the intellectual life as something apart from experiences, beliefs, ideals, and even traumas is impoverished as a result.
Richard Snyder
Dene, I was just typing this!
Richard Snyder
[smiling face emoji]
Mariusz Pisarski
Lakoff, George. Philosophy in the Flesh. Basic Books, 1999.
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[smiling face emoji]
Richard Snyder
I've read some great arguments that Montaigne's philosophy is so enduring because it is embodied -- before prescientific thought picked up Platonic dualism
Electronic Literature Lab
Yes. There are moments of insights like that one, but unfortunately the overriding view that persisted had been dualism, which is not really sustainable for humanity
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the hyper masculinity promoted by Trumpism is a sign of this
Richard Snyder
Stephen Toulmin: "Montaigne actually argues for the unification of body and soul...Philosophers are drawn to dualism, he suggests, only when they are uncomfortable with their own corporeal natures"
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I love Toulmin's work. Been a while since I read him
Richard Snyder
Yeah, he's great. This quote is from Cosmopoulis
Kathleen Zoller
I'm curious to hear your personal take on the pros of hypertext as a mode of self reflection?
Dan Walker
Hi Richard! Thank you for the reading! Given the changes you've described in how we understand trauma, and the changes in media/tech, how do you think you'd approach writing a work like Genetis today?
Astrid Ensslin
Randall Okita's VR work does that kind of thing, Dene.
Kathleen Zoller
Lately I've felt the intertwining of physical and virtual realities, almost to the point that my mind no longer separates them because one reality so deeply affects the other
Kathleen Zoller
Before, they felt completely isolated and unrelated
Kathleen Zoller
But, maybe I'm stretching it to say video chat is a "virtual reality"
Stella Wisdom
what about literary and dramatic performances in online gaming worlds like Minecraft and Grand Theft Auto?
Richard Snyder
@Kathleen Zoller well said. William Gibson has argued that the network is "everting" via mobile devices and the internet of things
Astrid Ensslin
Hello Stella! [smiling face emoji]
Stella Wisdom
Hi [smiling face emoji]
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Interesting, Kathleen. Virtual for me is a state that allows for us to rethink reality
Kathleen Zoller
@Electronic Literature Lab I love that
Stella Wisdom
yes [smiling face emoji]
Stella Wisdom
I was trying to lurk
Dan Walker
I've felt that intertwining also, Kathleen! I had a dream about being on a zoom call last night -- it was kinda bizarre, I've always dreamed physical reality things in the past
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we love lurkers
Stella Wisdom
[smiling face emoji]
Kathleen Zoller
Thank you Richard Smyth! I'm beginning to wonder if the medium determines how much is left to the reader's imagination vs how much is a controlled experience
Kathleen Zoller
Agreed, hypertext has its strengths
Stella Wisdom
I was thinking about writers and creatives experimenting in popular game world environments.
Astrid Ensslin
or LARPs! [smiling face emoji]
Stella Wisdom
I have lots of friends who LARP
Stella Wisdom
I have made notes of books that I should read from this discussion
Kathleen Zoller
Thank you!
Dan Walker
thank you Richard!
Katya Farinsky
Thank you all!
Stella Wisdom
thanks
Astrid Ensslin
Thanks, everyone, for joining us! Looking forward to continuing the conversation!
Richard Snyder
Thanks so much!
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Social Media Content for Kathy Mac's "Unnatural Habitats"
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YouTube Chat
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Holly June
Hello everyone!
Andrew Klein
Hi!
Denise McClure
Hello!
Kathleen Zoller
Hello!
Louise Chase
Hello ... is anyone else having difficulty hearing (my laptop is set at maximum volume but I'm straining to hear ... so am wondering...)?
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Hi folks
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thanks for coming
Andrew Klein
Sound is fine on my end
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Louise, check the sound on Youtube to see if it is also turned up
Louise Chase
yes, i have thanks ... going to try another computer ..
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Here is the link to the ELD and the short essay Asrid just published this morning for us: https://directory.eliterature.org/ind...
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You saw the loading screen for the work. This is a small work in comparison of some of the others we have Traversed this year.
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This is the TOC for the work you are looking at.
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The work is divided into three sections
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There is a lag due to the remote aspect of our presentation
Kathleen Zoller
I like how certain paragraphs are separated and offset in chunks. It reminds me of launching a rocket, and seeing the pieces fall away as it goes
Kathleen Zoller
The map also appears to be well-organized
Kathleen Zoller
Does .ssp stand for "storyspace project"?
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i just gave you an impromptu tour of the maps
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yes
Kathleen Zoller
Thank you!
Astrid Ensslin
Kathleen, yes, the visual aspect is key.
Astrid Ensslin
Flicking through the lexias it even becomes a kinetic poem.
Kathleen Zoller
Agreed Astrid, the text also feels like it is floating in outer space
Astrid Ensslin
Keep that idea in mind as we go through this Traversal.
Kathleen Zoller
Will do!
Astrid Ensslin
that's my favorite part of the cycle.
Astrid Ensslin
It sums up so much of human experience.
Astrid Ensslin
Tapering off ... to the period of annihilation
Andrew Klein
capsule-shape is almost space-invader-esque here -- the shape was instantly evocative of space-craft descending!
Astrid Ensslin
Love the simile, Andrew.
Kathleen Zoller
Pioneers are the people who go to space, go below sea, travel underground, and explore this new (at the time) digital realm of hypertext
Astrid Ensslin
Yes, they leave their "natural" comfort zones.
Astrid Ensslin
patchwork girl, anyone?
Kathleen Zoller
quilting does seem to be a popular analogy for hypertext!
Astrid Ensslin
Marie-Laure Ryan collected all the different metaphors for hypertext, and the quilt was one of them.
Richard Snyder
Where can I see that, Astrid?
Astrid Ensslin
Narrative as Virtual Reality, I think
Richard Snyder
Thanks!
Andrew Klein
cool experiment nonetheless!
A.X. Roads
I haven't been around for the other traversals so this point may have been brought up already, but it's so interesting to see how this structure lives on in digital zines like you'd find on itchio
Astrid Ensslin
Do you mean Twine games?
Astrid Ensslin
Kathy was doing elit of/on elit [smiling face emoji]
A.X. Roads
I'm actually not sure if what I'm thinking of was specifically made with Twine but yes
Richard Snyder
I'm not sure it's intentional, but the visual impression of the arrows here put me in mind of NASA diagrams calculating something like reentry angles, etc. [smiling face emoji]
Richard Snyder
Completely intentional! [smiling face emoji]
Andrew Klein
I've only seen a few Traversals but Kathy's really does feel very self-aware of its concrete dimensions (that is, re: layout of even the lexias).
Andrew Klein
I think it shows the need for Hayles's Media-Specific Analysis when we approach these pieces with students especially
Electronic Literature Lab
Yes, we noticed this ourselves during the rehearsal on Monday, Andrew
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She also experiments with animating text across screens
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We saw this same effect in Michael Joyce's afternoon, a story
Richard Snyder
Kathy, thank you for presenting today. Were you influenced in your design for the lexia by any specific examples of concrete poetry or perhaps artist's books?
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What gets me excited about this work is that way artists push boundaries, as Astrid just said
Andrew Klein
my question, as well, Richard!
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Good question
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Textile work is very influential with hypertext
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So many artists, as Kathleen pointed out earlier, used metaphors of quilting, stitching, sewing
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Patchwork Girl encapsulates this idea in the title alone
Richard Snyder
What a great answer, thank you! I love that you took this textile metaphor approach to electronic media.
Richard Snyder
Also reminds me of Knit++ in Turbulence, by xurban collective.
Sarah Xerar Murphy
You can feel the physical threads there Kath... But also has the sense of the tragic absence of actual texture...
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Yes, Richard
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The notion of natural has been destabilized. Humans fly liked bird; dolphins paint like humans
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birds, that is
Andrew Klein
Kathy, did you have plans for this project before you encountered Storyspace? Or did exploring Storyspace move you to this project?
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I love that question
Andrew Klein
Followup: would you/did you conceive of a non-hypertext version?
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I want so badly to teach a course in the linguistically and structural aesthetics of hypertext poetry
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D is a dental which punctuates the line
Astrid Ensslin
As with Lust? That's a great work to teach for linguistic structure, Dene.
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Oh yes, Astrid. on that list
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The S sound can be soothing or hissing
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The Sibilant is one of my favorite sounds
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Sound carries meaning
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Aporia means gaps
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gap
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singular
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Espen Aarseth talks about this feature in his book Cybertext
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He suggests that aporia leads to epiphany
Sarah Xerar Murphy
Does sound reconstruct physicality in a digital world?
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Sonic imagery is all about that, Sarah
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Imagery is the poet's way of instantiating ideas
Sarah Xerar Murphy
Also hearing it yourself...
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What I love about sound is that it is only sensory modality hard-wired in our brain
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It is powerful for that reaosn
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reason
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The wonderful structure and linking apparatus of that structure would be lost if it were turned into print
Sarah Xerar Murphy
Perhaps re-embodying the self would be a better way of thinking about it....
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Next Friday we will host a launch party for the release of the archival version of Richard Holeton's Figurski on Findhorn on Acid
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If you wish to join us, contact me directly at dgrigar@wsu.edu
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I'll send you a Zoom link
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The lab migrated the work from Storyspace to open web lanagues
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languages
Denise McClure
Thank you for this.
Louise Chase
Wonderful ... thank you all!
Astrid Ensslin
Thanks to everyone in the audience for joining us today.
Sarah Xerar Murphy
Great! Thank you!
Kathleen Zoller
Thank you so much! Such a wonderful traversal