Day 5
Narrative Techniques
Dialogue
"It's OK!" he called up to the light the size of a postage stamp which was the open trapdoor. "It's a soft landing, you can jump!" Ron followed straight away. He landed sprawled next to Harry.
"What's this stuff?" were his first words.
"Dunno, sort of plant thing. I suppose it's here to break the fall. Come on, Hermione!"
The distant music stopped. There was a loud bark from the dog, but Hermione had already jumped. She landed on Harry's other side.
"We must be miles under the school," she said.
"Lucky this plant thing's here, really," said Ron.
"Lucky!" shrieked Hermione. "Look at you both!"
The Journey
To help you with what kind of journey you want your characters to go through watch these two videos, one about a hero and the other about the anti-hero, to get an idea about what you want your story to be about. The picture shows how the hero's journey, that Luke Skywalker undertakes in the Star Wars movies. This is just to help show you how to keep your story moving along and tell a story that is fun and interesting, sad and moving, or a mixture of both. What kind of journey are your characters going to go on? This journey should help your characters with whatever lesson or obstacle you have them facing. Also include in your paragraph what kind of journey you will have your characters adventure through.This page has paths:
- Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone Jesse Myers
