ENGL-411 Main MenuResumeWorld's Greatest DetectivesReflectionTime as an English MajorMichael Deodato's PortfolioThe X Factor In Magic RealismFriendly Neighborhood Spider-man Swings His Way to the ClassroomRevised copy of a paper showing the ways Spider-man can be useful in the classroomMichael Deodato9d794756a01f4c62e5fcbb85a00751d758df78ef
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12016-12-13T12:28:44-08:00Michael Deodato9d794756a01f4c62e5fcbb85a00751d758df78ef124983plain3615292016-12-13T12:58:48-08:00Michael Deodato9d794756a01f4c62e5fcbb85a00751d758df78efThe paper I chose was from my English 485 final assignment. The assignment was to bring a piece of literature that we thought should be brought into our class’s readings and be useful adolescents literature overall. The assignment said any piece of literature, so naturally I thought of the only superhero who started off in his awkward teen years. I picked the Ultimate Spiderman Volume 1 Power and Responsibility and what I changed from the original was edited the grammar to make it sound more scholarly and for the professor to better understand my work. Fixing the grammar helped so it doesn’t take away from the work. Another thing I fixed was re wording other sentences that sounded funny. Fixed words that were combined or mistyped when I spoke about the Green Goblin killing Harry’s mother it sounded like the whole thing was on one pages, so I elaborated how the two differed. Another thing I fixed was whenever I had original put spiderman it was spelt like that but after fixing it I hyphenated the word to Spider-man. I added detail that I had originally thought to be