12017-11-23T05:11:02-08:00Kiana Ng69c6cf2cb3f49e66d63135c4a2ead09defc183b2267141plain2017-11-23T05:11:02-08:00Kiana Ng69c6cf2cb3f49e66d63135c4a2ead09defc183b2There's a slight mismatch between your narrator's words and the text. While it's not the most important thing in the world, replacing "a" with "this" would keep the legibility/coherence of audio to text more consistent.
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