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ENGL665: Teaching Writing with Technology

Shelley Rodrigo, Author
Week 5: Sept. 22-28, page 1 of 3
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Kim BR4-Stormboard

This week I chose to use Stormboard for the note taking challenge. This system was pretty easy to use, and I appreciated that moving content and including images and videos was intuitive. 

Stormboard has a variety of templates to chose from. I started looking at the educational templates, and from there, I decided to go with the conflict map because I felt like this best suited the content of Medina's chapter focusing on the negative influence of stress. It's great that you can move the sticky notes anywhere to create different types of relationships between ideas/information. However, I wish the program allowed for a change in size for the sticky notes to bring more attention to certain concepts/ideas. This would also help display all the content within a sticky note. I felt really constrained by how little information is actually shown within the initial display of the sticky; though you can type more, readers actually have to click "more" to read the rest of the sticky. When you hover over images, a box pops up with the full image. I wish the same would happen with longer text boxes. Like I mentioned earlier, including videos is easy, but my concern is whether readers would recognize that a sticky includes a video since their is only a thumbnail image and no indication on the sticky that it is in fact a video. Readers would need to physically click on that sticky to open up the box with the video. I really wish the program automatically enlarged all stickies when you hovered over them.

In terms of classroom use, I can definitely see the collaborative possibilities. Students could contribute their own sticky to a class map that is either analyzing a reading or brainstorming ideas. I'm curious whether there are limits to how many people can collaborate on a board at a time. 

My last reflection is that I wish there was an easy way to embed a Stormboard into other platforms (if there is, I couldn't figure it out). Having viewed my classmates' notes in these last few weeks, I appreciate when a system can be integrated/embedded into their post just for ease of consumption. This system also requires you to sign up for a Stormboard account to view a board. This could be a good thing for classroom use because it creates some privacy with the content created, but it is a pain for easily sharing what you created.

Click here to check out my Stormboard. Use the ID 106137 and Key flavor86 to find my board once you have created an account.

This week, I took a look at Kevin's use of scratch and Shantal's use of Storify

I found in it really interesting the way you can incorporate movement and different backgrounds into the presentation. I especially like the background for the points about globalization. It was cool when I clicked "see inside" to see all the different steps within your presentation, and I like that it appears you can manipulate how long something is on the screen because I felt like I wished I had a little more time with some of the slides. I liked the wizard guiding us through the points, and it made me wonder how many options there are for this main character/narrator. I was also really intrigued by the characterization of it as an interactive media platform because I really just passively watched the presentation, leading me to wonder what capabilities for interaction there might be. 

In looking at Shantal's notes, I am reminded how much I really liked using Storify. I was impressed with the images in this presentation because I struggled so much when I was working with it to find appropriate images. The more I see examples from Storify, the more I am thinking about using it my courses. I am thinking now of perhaps using as an outlining activity for a narrative essay, asking students to incorporate images, GIFs, and videos into short amounts of text to explain their story. 
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Discussion of "Kim BR4-Stormboard"

Can't see your stormboard?

I can't view your stormboard without the Storm ID and Key to Join; I already have a storm board account because I reviewed this technology also in a previous week, but it doesn't let me see your board?

Posted on 22 September 2014, 3:06 pm by Heather Laslie  |  Permalink

Heather's Comment on BR 4 (Kim) Stormboard

I reviewed storm board during a previous week and was also frustrated with its inability to embed and the limitations on seeing the content on the sticky notes.

With regard to the BR4, it seems obvious that stress effects learning. My beef with these statements is always, "yeah, but I can't avoid most of my stress-it's all part of my life!" I do see the reminder though, not to stress out our children on testing days, and the like. We have to manage stress the best we can for the sake of our learning!

Posted on 23 September 2014, 8:51 am by Heather Laslie  |  Permalink

Added ID & Key

I added the ID & Key information, so hopefully that will help people view my board.

Posted on 24 September 2014, 9:37 am by Kimberly Fahle  |  Permalink

I really liked...

The template of the six categories; it prompted you to think about the content in different ways.
:-)

Posted on 24 September 2014, 12:12 pm by Shelley Rodrigo  |  Permalink

Shantal Reading Notes Week 5, 9/24 and Brain Rules 4

Summary


NCTE Position Statement on Machine Scoring

The NCTE position statement brings up several concerns about machine scoring and why schools should not use it. Standardized tests decontextualize writing and machine scoring grades writing superficially rather than on if the prompt fulfills the purpose of communicating meaning to another person. When grading on surface-level errors, a machine could fail nonnative speakers instead of taking their grown into account. Standardized tests graded by machine or taken on the computer are also unfair to school districts that have less funds and thus have students less experienced with technology. 

The NCTE offers an alternative: portfolios. Portfolios can show student growth over time and contain a larger variety of writing. Writing should be assessed based on local values and national standards. 


“Anxiety and Archive: Understanding Plagiarism Detection Services as Digital Archives” by James P. Purdy


Purdy’s article is an analysis of the plagiarism detection software Turnitin, the rhetoric it uses, and the alternative uses for the software. Purdy argues that TurnItIn could be seen as an archive with alternative uses outside of surveillance of plagiarism. While TurnItIn judges the integrity of other papers, its questions are called into question, especially since it archives student papers for profit without their explicit permission. Users must pay to have access to the archie. TurnItIn is an archival and surveillance tool that justifies itself by using appeals to fear, accessibility, and efficiency. If there is anxiety about using online sources to plagiarize papers, which TurnItIn claims is more popular and pervasive than ever, then teachers can use TurnItIn to save time and energy finding plagiarism. TurnItIn, however, has an algorithm for detecting “stolen” work that often sorts perfectly legitimate papers into the archive in which it keeps the works suspected of plagiarizing. While some of TurnItIn’s practices are not compatible with theories of writing and citation, it can be used as a digital archive for student work. TurnItIn has archival functionality that would make it very useful for a teacher or for other students who are doing research. TurnItIn, for example, could be used to track how many sources a student uses in a paper. 


“A Pedagogy of Resistance Toward Plagiarism Detection Technologies” by Stephanie Vie 


Vie argues that educators need to be cautious of TurnItIn because it creates notions of authorship and plagiarism that can be detrimental to the classroom. Vie rhetorically analyzes two sites- SchoolSucks and TurnItIn. These two sites appeal to students and administrators, respectively, and have different philosophies. SchoolSucks attempts to mock authority, while TurnItIn presents itself as an extension of authority or as an authority itself. Students can learn about plagiarism just by looking at both sites. Vie concludes that although educators use TurnItIn as a time-saving tool, that it needs to be looked at critically because it does not fully interrogate the meaning of plagiarism or authorship. 


Discussion


Anxiety is a central theme in this week’s readings. Anxiety on the part of administrators and teachers trying to catch students plagiarizing, anxiety on the part of NCTE council members as machine scoring becomes more popular,potential anxiety on the part of students who must often work in these changing learning environments. Even Brain Rules Chapter 4 is about how prolonged stress can create unhealthy situations for people. 


Sometimes, being under pressure can be a good thing. In the cause of Vie and Purdy’s articles, there is pressure to use TurnItIn as a “gotcha” plagiarism detection software that has caused scholars to think critically about its pedagogical implications. TurnItin promotes a certain ideology of writing that many educators don’t agree with, the idea that legitimate writing is 100% from a sole author’s brain. This environment of stress has maybe created the need to for teachers to talk to their students more in-depth about what plagiarism really is. Notions of authorship come from Western notions that it is possible to own an idea, and citation is not something that comes naturally to a lot of students. In my own reflective writing, I am usually loathe to find outside sources unless I am making a direct reference to a text. It takes effort and time. The pressure to use machine scoring as a way of grading papers has also created dialogue that explains the nature of writing. 


Stress, as Brain Rules explains, can be very detrimental as well. Vie and Purdy criticize TurnItIn because it labels students papers as being plagiarized based on principles that don’t always match what students learn through their instructors.TurnItIn creates an environment where students are “guilty until proven innocent” (Purdy 5). I certainly remember having moments in high school or during my undergraduate degree where my plagiarism score caused me to be anxious about the assignment. As a student who has gone to public school and has taken national standardized tests like the ACT, GRE, and SAT, I also know how stressful these tests can be. In the context of public schools, I do think that standardized testing also creates an environment of surveillance and punishment that can damage a learning environment, especially when tests are graded by machine. I went to public school in Florida and Texas, two states that had yearly standardized tests. Teachers often taught for the tests, which limited the curriculum. Machine scoring also exacerbates the problem because it often grades on grammar, word choice, syllabus counts- all surface level issues. The NCTE position statement also mentions how assessment software can be “gamed.” There is an academic sentence generator from the University of Chicago. It would be an interesting (or hilarious) endeavor to create a paper full of empty academic sentences and see how it gets scored. 




Works Cited

National Council for Teachers of English. "NCTE Position Statement on Machine Scoring." NCTE.  National Council of Teachers of English. n.d. Web. 22 Sep. 2014.

 

Purdy, James P. "Anxiety and Archive: Understanding Plagiarism Detection Services as Digital Archives."Computers and Composition 26 (2009): 65-77. ScienceDirect. Web. 22 Sep. 2014.


Vie, Stephanie. "A Pedagogy of Resistance Toward Plagiarism Detection Technologies" Computers and Composition 30(2010): 3-15. Science Direct. Web. 22 Set. 2014.






Storify is a software that allows users to create quick and simple narratives. It worked well with Brain Rules because Brain Rules is making an argument in a very simplified way. Storify encourages a linear narrative and does not allow for much customization. I do not see myself using it over other software, but it might be a good way for students to get their feet wet with new media presentation or story telling.



Comments: 


I love the idea of using Storify as a brainstorming tool for a narrative essay or story. I hadn't thought about it before, but it could be a cool way to sketch or outline what you want to write! Having students look for images that match their topic could help them think about what to write if they are stuck.

I agree that Stormboard could be a neat collaborative tool for students. I don't like how you have to navigate, though. I guess I'm not a fan of having to click on a page in order to read through more of the information because I am used to scrolling down a page. Stormboard would be a useful way of getting quick notes.  


The template for Scoop is so limiting that I have to agree that it would not be a good note-taking tool. The articles available are interesting. It really makes me think that this software is trying to push a certain ideology by choosing to include or exclude certain articles. 


The name of the game this week is template. These different softwares have been different forms of templates- some with limiting choices and some with a wider range of choices. These templates really affect how a reader can view the information, or even what information get seen period. It makes me wonder about the purpose of each site and why it was initially built. 

Posted on 28 September 2014, 8:58 pm by ShantalFigueroa  |  Permalink

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